My poems are not mine,
You write I simply follow,
My life is but your direction.
You command, I follow,
Then why do I struggle,
Shouldn’t all actions and deeds be bestowed at your feet,
Where I lay in peace.
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A pleasing concisely structured poem. However the line , ” They why do I struggle ” does not make grammatical sense and requires correction. Also, the use of the ” & ” is frowned upon and needs to be replaced by the word ” and “.
I meant to say Then why do I struggle
Will keep a check next time I post my poems
Thank you 🙂
Wow!!! Praising words. Keep writing about what God’s love. Bless you. And Your welcome add this on you list. And this has encourage me to possibly have this printed on some flowered paper or to a background image transparent with this poem framed for purchase.
Thank you Feon. I see that you have a website on which you sell frames with poems on it.
That is interesting.
Do share you poems too. I would love to read them.
Your idea delights me.