Follower

My poems are not mine,

You write I simply follow,

My life is but your direction.

You command, I follow,

Then why do I struggle,

Shouldn’t all actions and deeds be bestowed at your feet,

Where I lay in peace.

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About rashmimalapur

Writing is my passion. It is the best way to convey my feelings, emotions & views. I consider myself blessed to be able to use this medium & reach to the world. Any moment can be captured through poetry. Poetry is healing & is my life. I love to read what others write & listen to people while they narrate their stories. My blog is a medium of self- expression www.researcheye.wordpress.com.

6 thoughts on “Follower

  1. Louis Kasatkin

    A pleasing concisely structured poem. However the line , ” They why do I struggle ” does not make grammatical sense and requires correction. Also, the use of the ” & ” is frowned upon and needs to be replaced by the word ” and “.

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  2. feon

    Wow!!! Praising words. Keep writing about what God’s love. Bless you. And Your welcome add this on you list. And this has encourage me to possibly have this printed on some flowered paper or to a background image transparent with this poem framed for purchase.

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