Here I am ,
stood on the edge of forever
expecting to fly ,
all my days have receded now
and it’s time to say ” goodbye ” ;
I recall how I fumbled
all that I was given
as I stumbled
onto the ground with a cry ,
and I wondered whether
I really did hear you sigh ?
There am I
standing on the edge of forever
expecting to fly ,
and I wonder whether
I’ll get to say to myself – ” goodbye ” ?
It is the most formidable of subjects and to give it a poetic touch with minimal use of jargon, to my mind, no easy task ! Yet Louis Kasatkin , as expected, manages to enthuse us with such diverse enough topics so as to make us sigh- no ‘goodbye’ now or ever!
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The comment (by kelly bella):
Somehow you make emotional pain beautiful… or maybe it’s the way you write about being inside your readers’ minds giving your readers the sense of not being in this alone.