Expecting to fly

Here I am ,

stood on the edge of forever

expecting to fly ,

all my days have receded now

and it’s time to say ” goodbye ” ;

I recall how I fumbled

all that I was given

as I stumbled

onto the ground with a cry ,

and I wondered whether

I really did hear you sigh ?

There am I

standing on the edge of forever

expecting to fly ,

and I wonder whether

I’ll get to say to myself – ” goodbye ” ?

2 thoughts on “Expecting to fly

  1. lokesh roy

    It is the most formidable of subjects and to give it a poetic touch with minimal use of jargon, to my mind, no easy task ! Yet Louis Kasatkin , as expected, manages to enthuse us with such diverse enough topics so as to make us sigh- no ‘goodbye’ now or ever!

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    The comment (by kelly bella):

    Somehow you make emotional pain beautiful… or maybe it’s the way you write about being inside your readers’ minds giving your readers the sense of not being in this alone.

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