Drowning, I caught the straw.
The straw smiled at me,
Eyes full of compassion
Knowing fully well that
It could not save me.
‘I leave your hand dear friend
For I would not drag you
In this huge watery tomb.
Weary of life, I depart
With regrets none
And smiles many.
pramila khadun
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Poignant and imaginative.
Thanks dear Vijay for this great comment.
A small kindness live a smile, even after.
Truly inspiring!
Thanks my dear Tapeshwar for this mind blowing comment.
A heartening one 🙂
Thanks my dear Monika for ths lovely comment.
Poignant and compassionate
Thanks my dear Sunila for this great comment.
An affecting and profound yet circumspect work.
Thanks my dear friend Louis for this great comment.