Dream?

Night falls with weighty silence-
mind rests, dreams arise
and the thoughts run.
But somewhere in this haze I’m awake.
A red scarf floats
before my overcast eyes;
from the mist you approach.

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About Rahul Aithal

I am from Mumbai, India. Composing poems gives me immense pleasure. Few poetic sites I write on are - poemhunter.com, poeticvoice.ning.com, poetfreak.com and, recently Avant-Garde-Writer's Haven (on Facebook). You could browse my other writes on my private blog, rahulaithal.blogspot.com. I am glad to have joined this site, thanks to Louis. I hope to add value and get the group going.

4 thoughts on “Dream?

  1. Louis Kasatkin

    Intriguing , disquieting , ethereal . Rahul’s poetic vignette certainly hits the spot……[ Editorial Note…A minor grammatical ponit, I stumbled over the line , ” a read scarf floats “. Should it be “reed” or “red ” ? ]

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  2. Rahul Aithal Post author

    Thanks Louis for the comment and the correction. You are right, it should be ‘red’ and not ‘read’. I appreciate your reading each and every poem so minutely.

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