Belfast:Traditions

As he waits,

the grey-haired man

smiles at his grandson

practising marching in step,

clouds prevent the sun

from gleaming on silver trumpets,

drums stay mute,

banners remain furled,

shoulders shrug

and the grey-haired man

waits

to get the bus home.

(written around 1998,previously unpublished;Louis Kasatkin has asserted his Right to be recognised as the author of this work)

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    I think this poem is one of your best… you can evoke so many different kinds of emotions with your simple word choices and well-chosen images… excellent!

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